mirror+writing

MIRROR WRITING

The young girl looking back at me seems familiar. She always wears her dark brown hair, __tide__ in a ponytail. Her Sparkling brown eyes shimmer when the sun shines on them. Her lips are round with pink for the colour. She has a __litish__ brown skin colour. Her nose is round like a basketball. She has no freckles and never wears headbands or earrings.

She was born in the year 1998 in a Christchurch hospital along with her twin sister. She has had awesome experiences through her life. Like when she broke her wrist. She was lying on the top of her cosy bunk bed. She peered down and looked at her sister then she magically fell of and hit the piano on the floor. It really hurt, luckily there was no blood.

Her dreams in life are to be a professional netball or basketball player because she likes doing sports. She likes her school so much, like when they went to Camp Pauanui! It was a cool experience going snorkelling for crabs, or kayaking at the beach. The best part of school is playing with her friends at lunchtimes. J By Brooke Koopu J __//Miss Crawford - Always nice to know your favourite part of school is learning :) There are few spelling errors, I have underlined those. I wonder if you can add anything to paragraph 2? Could you describe your bunk? Why were you looking at your sister?//__